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DIE FOR LOVE

In a park, where i did dwell
I met the guy i love so well
he took my hand close to me
and now he wants to set me free

one day i saw a girl sat upon his knee
he told her the things he never told me
now i know the reason why
the girl was prettier than i

i ran home to cry in my bed
not a word to mom i said
my dad went home late that night
he searched for me from left to right

and on my door he sorely broke
he saw me hanging on a rope
he got a knife to cut me down
and on my desk a note was found:

"dig my grave, dig it deep
with marble steps from head to feet.
and on my head please put a dove,
to show the world that i die for love"
-anonymous
--- I'm asking for help, what is the best title for this poem?
What do you think of the poem?
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#2
*rushed comment g2g soon*
That's really sad...
But it's good though!
I have no idea about the title though
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#3
I like this : D Hmm... for a title... Maybe "Die for love"?
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#4
Well, thanks... I'll take it..
Do or die. Make you choice.
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#5
thanks to kenjie.. it has a title.
well, i just wanna share this poem to y'all out there.
Do or die. Make you choice.
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#6
Thanks for sharing. I have to agree with Koutarou's sentiments that this is a sad poem! I really like the way the breakup was described
Quote:and now he wants to set me free
very gentle! Smile I wish the character had been able to talk to someone though, and maybe instead of a sad ending we could have had an alternative scenario. Moving nonetheless ^^
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#7
yeah, thanks for appreciating..
Do or die. Make you choice.
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#8
its very good! me likey. Big Grin astig! galing mo!
Lets go to hell, with our hands clasped, together. As we enter its fiery gates and hear the cries and shouts of the damned, we'll walk in with smiles in our faces and scorn God, for not even death can withstand our love.
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#9
I almost cried...seriously lol. Very nice poem indeed. Die for Love is a good title for this poem!
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#10
*sniff* so sad. I really liked it. Die for Love is a good title
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